Optional cut-aways

If the above opening scene is too short then below is the optional addition to the script, starting after the movie title instead of the opening credits. Below are a series of various flashbacks which can be used in addition to the opening credits, either all or some of them. The opening credits will appear on a black screen, a flashback will show, then the credits again and so on or the credits appearing during these shots. Two sets of shots; one for Riley showing parts of her path to madness and one for Detective Lax showing clues and an insight to his life

SHOTS FOR RILEY

MEDIUM SHOT
shows an open window with voila blowing in from the wind then the camera tilts slowly down to the floor to show a knife and string tangled around it

MEDIUM SHOT
we see the edge of a modern television, running centre of the frame, showing a blank wall and a fuzzy screen

MEDIUM-SHOT
outdoor wall surface that gets splattered with blood

VERY LONG SHOT
showing a pathway in a park/open area with a couple in the distance walking, tall man with arm around the shoulder of a shorter female companion, camera tilting up towards the sky

MEDIUM CLOSE-UP
very shallow depth of field showing a dusty surface and very blurred dark background as shadows flicker over it

MEDIUM CLOSE-UP
slow pan of a surface covered in lots of printed out papers from self-help websites from left to right and fade out

CLOSE-UP
showing a pile of handwritten letters covered in little vibrant red drops of blood

LONGSHOT
we see a shadow cast upon a wall showing a male figure sitting down with her head in her hands